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So why is this edit called one flesh? This was for a english poem that I did in school. The poem's by Elizabeth Jennings
Here's the poem:
Lying apart now, each in a separate bed,
He with a book, keeping the light on late,
She like a girl dreaming of childhood,
All men elsewhere - it is as if they wait
Some new event: the book he holds unread,
Her eyes fixed on the shadows overhead.
Tossed up like flotsam from a former passion,
How cool they lie. They hardly ever touch,
Or if they do, it is like a confession
Of having little feeling - or too much.
Chastity faces them, a destination
For which their whole lives were a preparation.
Strangely apart, yet strangely close together,
Silence between them like a thread to hold
And not wind in. And time itself's a feather
Touching them gently. Do they know they're old,
These two who are my father and my mother
Whose fire from which I came, has now grown cold?
SO GUYS I'M PUTTING IN THIS BOLD AND CAPS BECAUSE I HAVE A IMPORTANT QUESTION: DO YOU THINK I SHOULD CHANGE MY DEVIANT NAME?
No one is here to see this.
Thankyou All ^_^
Have a nice day
xx
cameraphotosxx
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Here's the poem:
Lying apart now, each in a separate bed,
He with a book, keeping the light on late,
She like a girl dreaming of childhood,
All men elsewhere - it is as if they wait
Some new event: the book he holds unread,
Her eyes fixed on the shadows overhead.
Tossed up like flotsam from a former passion,
How cool they lie. They hardly ever touch,
Or if they do, it is like a confession
Of having little feeling - or too much.
Chastity faces them, a destination
For which their whole lives were a preparation.
Strangely apart, yet strangely close together,
Silence between them like a thread to hold
And not wind in. And time itself's a feather
Touching them gently. Do they know they're old,
These two who are my father and my mother
Whose fire from which I came, has now grown cold?
SO GUYS I'M PUTTING IN THIS BOLD AND CAPS BECAUSE I HAVE A IMPORTANT QUESTION: DO YOU THINK I SHOULD CHANGE MY DEVIANT NAME?
No one is here to see this.
Thankyou All ^_^
Have a nice day
xx
cameraphotosxx
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I see this and the artwork is BOODIFULL!!!! Your name is pretty cool and unique so I think you should keep it-but this is only my opinion so you can do whatever you like. Your art BTW fits in so wonderfully with the poem-it's like it was made for it (although I guess, that was the whole point -.-")